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Jun 14 2007

TT #21

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This week’s Thursday Thirteen is a little different. Instead of a list I’ve written a story. In thirteen sentences. And inspired by the fact that yesterday was the Day of the Zombie Uprising

Zombie T13
image an edited version of the Italian Shaun of the Dead poster

“They’re out there.�

She was really starting to get on my nerves. I knew they were out there. I’d seen them, I’d been chased by them, legging it down the road screaming in terror as hordes followed me. I didn’t need her to tell me they were out there.

She repeated that fact, the only three words I’d heard her say since this whole thing had started. I resisted the urge to smack her, that really wouldn’t solve any problem, well, it might make me feel slightly better, but no, it really wouldn’t help. Instead I made those funny “mmm� noises, the ones that mean anything and nothing, in the hope that it might soothe her a little.

It didn’t.

She continued to repeat those words over and over again, all the time rocking backwards and forwards, reminding me of institutionalised orphans you see on those documentaries.

Then, a sudden silence that was so much worse than the moaning. “Alice,� I began to speak, wondering if she had come to her senses. Her head turned to look at me, her eyes glittered and the numb terror I’d been feeling was replaced by an increasing sense of panic as she opened her mouth and spoke: “We’re in here.�

Get the Thursday Thirteen code here!

The purpose of the meme is to get to know everyone who participates a little bit better every Thursday. Visiting fellow Thirteeners is encouraged! If you participate, leave the link to your Thirteen in others comments. It’s easy, and fun! Be sure to update your Thirteen with links that are left for you, as well! I will link to everyone who participates and leaves a link to their 13 things. Trackbacks, pings, comment links accepted!

Other TT-ers:

  1. Carl
  2. Samulli
  3. SciFiChick
  4. Amelia
  5. Michelle Pillow
  6. Raven Paranormal Blog
  7. Mark Caldwell
  8. Janet
  9. PJ

Tags: Day of the Zombie Uprising, fic, T13, zombies

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May 30 2007

Brink

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In the continuing, on off, saga of fiction prompted by Luna Nina’s Unconscious Mutterings:

Brink

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Tags: Brink, fic

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May 22 2007

Once Upon a Time Contest

Published by Fence under Challenges

Carl says “write“. Challenge issued; a story in one hundred words. But– and here’s the problem– no repetition allowed. So let us begin…

Fingers strike keys. Hesitate. Erase. Start again…

More difficult than it first sounded. Quick, fumble for that thesaurus, what’s another way of saying happy? Content? Blissful? Jovial? Exultant? Maybe “on cloud nineâ€?? Nope, not working out. Hit delete. Repeat.

My muse must be on holiday. Rather than feeling any happiness I’m plagued; inspiration simply won’t come.

Damnations, still short! Quick count. Close now, wait. Think. Ponder even.

By Jove, I think… yes, I’ve succeeded (or possibly cheated).


That wasn’t my entry, just a bit of fun, but if you want to enter the slightly clearer rules are:

*Write a 100-word short-short story. Don’t use the same word twice (OK, we make an exception for contractions if you really really really have to, so don’t is don’t and do not is do not, but don’t abuse this as a cheat too much — see if you can work around it).

*The title does not count as part of your 100 words. But just to make it interesting, make sure your title contains unique words as well.

*It has to be a story, with a tiny bit of narrative flow.

*It doesn’t have to be in the realm of the fantastic, it can be about anything.

This is a proper contest, with prizes and celebrity judges and everything. So go, give it a lash.

Tags: fic, Once Upon A Time Challenge

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May 01 2007

Crush :: First (week 221)

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prompt.

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Tags: Crush, fic

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Mar 26 2007

Bread

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It appears that it has been quite some time since I last wrote any fiction. Although I suppose that whole inane post regarding the love between chickens and cows and their offspring could be considered a strange form of fiction. Any way, I’ve decided that I’m going to use the LunaNina words as inspiration. Each week[1] I’ll pick one of her words and maybe write something inspired by it.

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Linknotes:
  1. providing you remember that just because I say that I intend to do something doesn’t actually mean that it will happen
Tags: bread, fic

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Sep 11 2006

The Memory of Running

Published by Fence under Books, Fiction

Author: Ron McLarty
ISBN: 0751537365
DDC: 813.6
See also: Library Thing; RonMcLarty.com; Penguin Guide

My parents’ Ford wagon hit a concrete divider on U.S. 95 outside Biddeford, Maine, in Auguest 1990. They’d driven that stretch of highway for maybe thirty years, on the way to Long Lake.

This is an odd book. On the one hand I quite enjoyed it while reading it, but it never mde for compelling reading, and I often put off reading it in favour of doing anything else. Maybe it is because I didn’t really get the narrator, Smithy Ide, I’m not sure what it was about him, but I didn’t like him all that much. I didn’t dislike him either, I was merely a bit meh about him.

Also the style of the book took a while to get used to. Short chapters flicking back to Smithy’s past. He loses his parents suddenly in a car crash, and then discovers that his older sister, Bethany, is dead. In a drunken state he finds his old Raleigh, and goes for a cycle. And then seems unable to stop.

As he pedals across America he meets many interesting people. Some who help him, some who distrust him. Some who even shoot him. Through it all his backstory, and that of his sister is revealed.

Bethany was a beautiful girl, and it is obvious that Smithy loved her, but he also hated her a little. For she had a voice, a voice that would tell her to do things and she couldn’t but listen. To be very blunt she was crazy.

Sometimes she would strike a pose, and remain, unmoving, totally still for as long as possible. Other times she would be violent to herself, scratching her face and pulling her hair out. Sometimes she would say hateful things, and sometimes she’d just disapear. Then the whole family would set out looking for her. Smithy running or biking everywhere as he tried to find her and bring her home. But then he grew older, went to Vietnam, came back and started drinking and sitting around doing nothing more and more. He stopped being a runner, and began to put on weight. Until he became the fat, friendless 43 year old drunk he is at the start of the novel.

In essence I suppose this is a road trip novel, a story about a man “on a quest�. Although he isn’t sure what he is looking for.

As I said, I did enjoy it, but I don’t think I’d really recommend it. I found it too easy to ignore, and while on occasion there are some nice lines, and interesting sentences, I was never really engaged in the story.

I know it sounds stupid, but they were smells with muscles.

In a way I suppose I found it a little simplistic. Smithy is left alone by the death of parents, in shock he goes for a bike ride and keeps on biking. That is it. Although it isn’t really. His cycle is his way of finding himself, of coming to peace with the past and the darkness of his sister’s madness.

I guess I’m more than a little ambivalent about this one.

Tags: 7 Stars, 813.6, ambivalent, car crash, death, first person narrator, memory, personal journey, Ron McLarty, The Memory of Running

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May 12 2006

28 days… six hours… 42 minutes… 12 seconds

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More fiction, this time some scratch-fiction from Everything Comes Together at 2 am

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Tags: fic, scratch fiction

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